Say More, With Less: How to Make Your Words Land

Respect your audience’s attention. Share your point like it’s a perfect little espresso shot—strong, smooth, and no extra foam.

PRO TALK

Liz Stubbs

8/9/20251 min read

a group of people standing in front of a wall with the words, say,
a group of people standing in front of a wall with the words, say,

You know that person who takes three minutes to answer a question that could’ve been answered in ten seconds? Don’t be that person. In a world where attention spans are shorter than a TikTok dance, brevity isn’t just nice—it’s necessary.

Here’s why: people can only retain so much. If your point is buried in a word avalanche, it’s not going to stick. The art is in packaging your brilliance so it’s easy to hear, remember, and repeat.

Tip 1: Lead With the Headline

Think like a news anchor. Give the big idea first, then add details if needed.
Instead of:

“Well, there are a few factors we’ve been looking at over the past couple of quarters that might influence how we approach this project…”
Try:
“We should pause the project until the budget is approved—here’s why.”

Why it works: People know instantly what you mean and can decide whether they need more info. You’ve given them the hook before the backstory.

Tip 2: Cut the Cushion Words

Phrases like “I just think,” “kind of,” “maybe,” and “in my opinion” weaken your message and add clutter.
Instead of:

“I just think we might want to maybe consider changing the timeline.”
Try:
“Let’s move the timeline.”

Why it works: Your ideas sound confident and clear, and you save brain space for your listener.

Bottom line: Respect your audience’s attention. Share your point like it’s a perfect little espresso shot—strong, smooth, and no extra foam.